Super glad you did another rankup, because we all see how much you've improved in terms of going outside your comfort zone, especially with all your backgrounds o3o
Unfortunately you till haven't ranked up to Class B, but you were realllly close. (If you want, I can PM you your scores)
I think right now you could work on fixing your perspective -- your third image's perspective is super wonky. I did a quick fix:
Mine definitely isn't perfect because I didn't draw my vanishing points in, but you can see if you just established a horizon line and vanishing points, it can make life a lot easier and nicer.
Also regarding the third image, you need to focus on details and small details. Like the fridge and table are all super wonky, as if you didn't bother fixing them. Straight lines matter yo
Nice variations on the line thickness in the mountain drawing though. Just be aware that the thicker the lines are, the closer they are to the front, meaning you could make the lines thinner at the mountains.
Honestly all you need to do to now is to keep working on your backgrounds and not being so lazy with small details (like the feet. Them toe stumps). I personally liked how you made the characters interact with the background though
That's all for now! You're definitely getting there, keep trying ~
Please set your username to your site one, so an arbiter can assign your website rank to you. Otherwise, inactives/random people will be kicked. If you have a preferred name, put that in front, then in brackets put your site name afterward.
This chat is more convenient in the matter that you can directly paste screenshots (if you have Windows, use the Snipping Tool program) into chat and it loads :P It's also quicker to get feedback from other artists on the site. Discord's available as a web browser, separate program, and a phone app. So use whichever one's more convenient to ya~
Ay, we recently announced Artist Of The Month on the news page, which can be found by clicking the "News" button at the top of website. Please don't hesitate to PM me if you have any feedback/suggestions on the idea, as we'd love to hear them .
Art pouring out of yer brain? Too many threads to handle? We suggest you make ONE thread and post all of your art as new posts to keep track of them all and make them easy to find ^^ Then you could also look back on old feedback